100 WC WEEK #3

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The crocodile of the great Amazon

Samantha was giving a tour to the tourists on the brown mucky water of the Amazon when a crocodile hit the purple boat full of tourists. Samantha panicked and took control of the boat. It was difficult to control, then when all seemed like nothing could get any worse the boat took a huge blow from the crocodile. The boat was now all twisted up. And then Professor Poochi got gobbled up by the crocodile. Soon the brown mucky water was now a river full of blood.

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  1. UnknownSeptember 29, 2017 at 12:54 PM

    Great opening line setting the scene and the main character all in one consist sentences. I was not expecting the ending. I can tell you have taken time to carefully edit your work.

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