100 WC week 4

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                                                                   Mr.Bark

It was another ordinary day in Lakewood Elementary. Our regular teacher Ms.Lace was sick so we had a substitute teacher named Mr.Bark. That sounded like a very strange name to hear but I just sucked it up and sat down. But then a  very small clumsy man with a huge over coat and hat walked in the room. When he walked he looked like he was a baby taking his first steps. And when he turned around we were shocked to see a dog face. And the dog was wearing glasses
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  1. UnknownOctober 11, 2017 at 9:23 PM

    A great comparison of how he was walking to that of a baby. Make sure these 100 word stories are you own ideas. Missing some important capitals on Elementary and i and your ending period.

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